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第二部分大作文七种功能段落的写法

一图画描述段落
两幅图的写法：
The set of drawings above vividly depicts……
As is shown in the first cartoon,
On the contrary,

一幅图的写法
Basically, what we see in this picture is……

图画描述段落的写作四要素：
同位语定语从句分词做状语平行结构

2005年范文
The picture vividly depicts an intense football match with five football players, actually the five members of a family, among whom three sons and a daughter are playing the role of goalkeeper at the four corners, while their old father is crouching into the shape of a football, attempting to roll into one of the nets.
2007年真题
1）describe the drawing
2) explain its intended meaning
3) support your view with an example/examples

核心名词：Football player ；striker ；goal-keeper/goalie/goal deeper ；the left man  ；  the right person
核心动词：shot ；  guard ；Consider/feel/believe ；catch the upcoming soccer ；says to himself
hesitates to kick the ball ；with an illusion


二图表描述段落
What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in ……from… to…
…… have declined by…..while ……have increased respectively by…….
The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.

上升：rise ； climb ； go up ； move upward
下降：decline ； drop ； decrease ； go down ； move downward

三意义揭示段落
What a vivid and accurate picture it is when describing/comparing the meaning of love in the dark.
As is shown in the picture, the love is just like the light in the picture, which seems luminous in the sun, but it certainly shines brighter in the dark.
In other words,the darker the place is, the more precious the light will be. Love is somewhat the same. It surely means much more to the man who is in great difficulty(good times) than to the one who is in bad times(easy street).


What a set of vivid and accurate pictures there are when……
As is shown in the picture,


四问题分析段落
两种写法：
1 原因分析
Why does this phenomenon appear? I am convinced that there are several possible reasons for this. First …
Secondly…
Besides…
金钱经济最常用
Alleviate   减轻
Be profuse of  缺乏
Burden  负担
Burn money  浪费钱
Expend  花费消耗
Finance  资助
Lack      缺乏
Overdraft  透支
Pawn  抵押
Run out of  用完
Subsidize 资助
Throw money into thin air  浪费钱
Waste  浪费
Be profuse in 挥霍浪费


As poor as a church mouse 穷的象教堂里的老鼠
Costly  昂贵的，贵重的
Destitute  困穷的，缺乏的
Extravagant  奢侈的，浪费的
Impoverished 穷困的
Insufficient  不足的，不够的
Lucrative 赚钱的，生利的
Luxurious  奢侈的，豪华的
Miserable  痛苦的，悲惨的
Needy  贫困的，缺乏生活必需品的
Precious  宝贵的，贵重的
Profitable  盈利的
Stingy  吝啬的



A tight budget  资金紧张
Beggar  乞丐
Budget  预算
Burden  负担
Charity hospital  慈善医院
Dissipation  挥霍
Economic burden  经济负担
Eligible children  适龄儿童
Famine  饥荒
Financial aid 经济资助
Financial strain  资金紧张
Foreign currency  外汇
Government  revenue  政府税收
Greed  贪婪
Hard－earned money  辛苦挣来的钱
Healthcare   医疗保险
Hunger  饥饿
Insurance  保险
Jobless  失业的失业者
Laid－off worker  下岗工人
Life assurance  人寿保险
Limited－public funds  有限的公共资金
Necessity  必要性必需品
Nursing house 敬老院
Pauper  乞丐
Scarcity  缺乏不足
Shelter  庇护所栖身之所
Starvation  饥饿
Taxpayer  纳税人
Welfare  福利，幸福


政府原则
central government having formulated numerous measures to…
local governments think little of/ brush over/take no count of/ignored

意识原则：


方法二简爱模式
Needless to say/undoubtedly/, the drawer of the picture aims to sound an alert to the serious problem of resources crisis.
Undoubtedly, the picture arouses a deep concern over the issue of
People have been fishing immoderately for financial benefit all these years; but the ocean resources is so numbered and that further rampant(extensive/large-scale/massive) commercial fishing is now out of the question.
If we let the situation go as it is, we can’t imagine where fish will be in the future. By that time, our environment will have suffered a great destruction.
2007年例子


五举例说明段落
To illustrate（explain，account for，illuminate，provide /offer a deep /excellent/fresh insight into）this conclusion, I will take Tao Xingzhi, one of the greatest educators in China, as an example.
1 as an example of… ,we should remember…  
2 as a good case in this point, we can see…
3 perhaps the most important/ telling/ dramatic/ striking of … is…
4 I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the example of…
5 … is often cited/ quoted as a familiar example of…
6 history/ this nation/ our society is filled with example of…
He was a man who gave love to those who needed most.
In the old days, quite a lot of children who were eager to go to school could not afford to do so. Seeing that, Mr. Tao gave up the comfortable life in the big city and set up a school especially for those poor children. Though most of these children only studied in his school for a short period, the knowledge they learned there changed their lives. Many years after Tao’s death, they still bore his kindness in mind and sang highly for his contribution to Chinese education.

六问题解决段落
方法一
This simple picture is a wake-up call for the whole of the human race. If this vivid image of the grim future of our planet is not to become a reality, we must take positive steps right now to put an end to
方法二
Whatever the reason, the current situation calls for an immediate solution undoubtedly. On the one hand……we should appeal to our authorities to enact concrete laws to control commercial fishing. On the other hand, we should enhance people’s awareness that ocean resources are vital to us and the ecological balance will be guaranteed with the strategy of sustainable development.
It is no exaggeration to say that Only by doing so can we effectively protect our natural resources. And only by paying due attention to the whole ecological system, I firmly believe, can we hope a brighter future


Personally, I
Personally speaking
As far as I'm concerned, I will engage in/participate in propaganda to let more and more people realize the importance of…….


七现象评论段落

　


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